ENGL1101: Take a Position

Create a thesis that is arguable; it must assert or deny something about your topic. To be arguable, a thesis must have some probability of being true. It should not, however, be generally accepted as true; it must be a statement with which people may disagree. 

Thesis writing tips:

• A thesis evolves as you work with your topic. Brainstorm, research, talk, and think about your topic before settling on a thesis. If you are having trouble formulating a thesis, begin freewriting about your topic. Your freewriting may suggest a workable thesis.
• During the writing process, consider your thesis a working thesis and be willing to change and re-focus it as you write and revise your paper.
• Keep your thesis in front of you as you research and write. Having your thesis in plain view may help focus your writing.

Test the strength of your thesis and see if it yields a strong antithesis.

Common thesis pitfalls:

• A thesis expressed as a fragment.
• A thesis which is too broad.
• A thesis worded as a question. (Usually the answer to the question yields the thesis)
• A thesis which includes extraneous information.
• A thesis which begins with I think or in my opinion.
• A thesis which deals with a stale or trite issue.
• A thesis which contains words which lead to faulty generalizations (all, none, always, only, everyone, etc.)

(UC Berkley)

Plan your paper with a specific audience in mind.

• Who are your readers? Are they a definable group--disinterested observers, opponents of your point of view, etc.?
• Perhaps you are writing to your classmates or your professor.
• If you're unsure, ask your professor who you should consider your target audience.
• Sometimes it is best to direct your argument to a general audience.